Editing : Continuity Sequence

This is my continuity sequence that i have made with the help of my classmates.
In this sequence, there is a match-on-action, shot reverse shot, focus pull, cut away and some other forms of cinematography. Some of the sounds used have actually been edited in to help create more of an atmosphere in the sequence, these sounds are non-diegetic.
The main purpose in this exercise was to just understand and get used to editing as a whole so mise-en-scene isn't amazing as well as the narrative being crude.